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Topic: Critiquing Crewe

Lacking the creativity to come up with some nifty opening for this, I'll just lay out the purpose of this thread: Critiquing my writing.

Are there things about it you like? Things you don't? Do I in general just make you sick to your stomach? If there's anything you've ever wanted to berate or praise me for, this is the place for it. Or if there's nothing specific, just any thoughts you might have to share.

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Re: Critiquing Crewe

I think you do a really good job with describing scenes, as seen in the Zoroark posts.

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I think you handle long paragraphs really well. In fact, I'm kind of envious of that because that is something I've always struggled with.