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WAAPT@tropi.us Legacy → OOC and Discussion → The Help-a-Slouch-Out Thread
Waheyyy!
Just making this thread so I have a place to ask for feedback, constructive criticism and general advice on posting if I need it.
I'm good for now but if I have a burning question or something I'll post it here. :)
Feels a little weird to ask, but could I please have a bit of feedback on my latest post? At first I was pretty happy with it but looking back I have some doubts. For instance, I feel like it might move too quickly/end too abruptly, and in places I worry that the dialogue isn't very natural. Is that accurate or am I being overly critical? :P
Extra questions because I'm greedy curious, feel free to ignore them
1.) Are there any characters of mine that you like?
2.) Any moments from my posts this year that you've enjoyed?
I think you're being overly critical in this case, but that's me.
As for me, I'm personally fond of Lustix and Riptide at least, but I think I'm fond of 'the Slouch Way' coming through stuff in general.
Thanks! I appreciate your input :)
WAAPT@tropi.us Legacy → OOC and Discussion → The Help-a-Slouch-Out Thread
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