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Topic: Diary of a Blooming Flower - Discussion

I figured it would be better to post things about the Diary here than on the RP's discussion thread, since that thread is for use in regards to RP itself, not for a Spin Off fanfic.

So, this is the thread to talk about Sakura's own adventures after the main adventures of the group have ended, talk about your opinion on the chapters, the characters, the writing, etc etc.

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Re: Diary of a Blooming Flower - Discussion

I really like it. The story is good so far an I can't wait to see more. However, I have to point out that you have a slight problem with run-on sentences. Nothin' huge but I'm sure you have at least a paragraph or two that's just one big long sentence. Keep up the good work!

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Re: Diary of a Blooming Flower - Discussion

Out of curiosity, is this where Rawst ends up having to choose between the child and Sakura? It kinda seems like it would t here.

4 Reply by FullMoon (edited by FullMoon 2013-04-02 01:23:39)

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Re: Diary of a Blooming Flower - Discussion

Yes, that's going to get adressed at some point, and it was Seth =P

And I'm aware of that problem, Newfie, I'm going to try to improve that a bit.