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I sort of wanna get in on the crackshipping bandwagon. Suggestions? :3

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...Herbert, how in the world did you manage to make something like Titan/Bishop adorable?

[Spectrum was here!]

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Is it weird that I'm now wondering if there'll be a Crewebert or Sambert(The other Sam.) fic? :P

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Which Sam?

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Marv's Sam.

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Roseradogs wrote:

I sort of wanna get in on the crackshipping bandwagon. Suggestions? :3

Joe/Jacob :P

Nyaaa

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Except all my characters are off limits for fics :P

And I'm super paranoid people will do it anyways and keep it hidden from me and I hope that never happens...

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It won't. Honestly, the most they'd ever get is friendship.

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Verax: Sorry, 'twas meant as a joke.

Nyaaa

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MOAR CRACK REQUIRED.

Seriously tho. Moar.

<Whatchu lookin at, PUNK?>

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YOU WANT CRACK? I'LL GIVE YOU CRACK! HOW ABOUT LYURI/ALLEN, HUH? THAT CRACK ENOUGH FOR YOU?

(Warning: The fic linked above contains intense amounts of No Yay, to the point where even I felt uncomfortable reading through it, and I wrote the bloody thing. It's still entirely SFW, though.)

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Holy God.

It was late afternoon in Pyrite Town, and Lyuri was staring into the face of the man who'd turned her life into a living hell.

What a positive start.

No, that was wrong. She wasn't looking at his face. She'd never seen his face. She'd only ever seen the mask, that eerie, dissonant smile that was somehow even worse than a blank expressionlessness.

... I'm pretty sure Lyuri saw Allen's face prior to the reveal.

It was almost unfair how she knew so little about him. She didn't even know his real name. Yet Alexiel knew everything about her. He watched her every move, directed her every action. Even her voice had been taken away from her, since speaking would instantly give her identity away. Reveal her to the world as the traitorous coward she was. All she had left that was truly hers was the several square inches within her own skull. And even that wasn't safe with his Gallade around.

... You know, I never actually thought about how Allen could use his Gallade against Lyuri.

Forcing herself to tear her gaze away from Alexiel's face, she cast her gaze over the rest of the warehouse.

Oh, so this is in the past.

The Ultra Ball that had snagged Bishop was now still, but she could've sworn that she saw it move out of the corner of her eye as the Scizor within continued to struggle, hoping in vain that he would be spared from his worst fear. Duke was stood silently in the corner, a dark grin that showed too many teeth spread across his face as he restrained the helpless Sakura. Not that Sakura needed restraining - all the fight had gone out of her from the moment she'd entered the warehouse. Lyuri didn't look straight down. She knew what was waiting for her if she looked straight down.

So this is before Herbert's arrival at the warehouse. And I guess in this universe Alexia snagged Bishop for real.

... Wait, what was on the ground that she couldn't look at?

She kept telling herself that this shouldn't have happened, that things weren't meant to be this way. Yet the bloody reality of it was laid out in front of her, plain for all to see, and the spark of hope that she had allowed to blossom was dying like a fire set on damp wood. The rest of the J-Team could be no more than mere metres away, and yet they'd have no way of knowing what was going on within these four walls.

Gee, I wish I could write this well.

"And it looks as if the curtains have closed on this particular scene," Alexiel announced, breaking the awful silence hanging across the warehouse like a mourner's shroud. "Excellent work, everybody! You all played your roles perfectly, and everything went according to the script. With one or two minor deviations, admittedly, but that can't be helped, can it?"

That's pretty in-character, actually this is probably more in-character than most of the lines I made for him =P

Lyuri didn't answer. Nobody did. Her tongue felt like a dead weight in her mouth, atrophied from months of disuse. She felt a churning sensation in her gut as Alexiel turned towards her. It might have been horror once, but after everything she'd been forced to do, horror had since numbed into a dull, constant, awful sickness lurking in the bottom of her stomach.

Wow, this is really grim.

"Particular thanks to you in particular, my dear sister. I didn't think you had it in you to finish him off. Looks like I was pleasantly mistaken."

Lyuri fought back bile behind her mask. She still couldn't bring herself to look down at the body. Then again, it was barely recognisable as Herbert anymore.

*realization dawns in*

... Holy fuck.

Her brain was still refusing to acknowledge that she'd done such a thing. In a way, it was right - she hadn't raised a finger against him herself, but she'd simply stood back and let it happen, watched as Duke savoured the screams of his former student before suddenly silencing them. She'd done nothing to intervene, nothing to try and stop it. She'd just stared, her mask hiding any trace of sorrow or shock. At least he'd died without knowing it was her behind the mask. She didn't want to think about what his reaction would've been had he found out.

... Wait a moment, if Herbert is dead and apparently only Bishop was snagged, where is the rest of Herbert's team? I don't think Lyuri would ignore their bodies and, well, it seems they had just snagged Bishop so if they were too their Pokéballs would still be around.

Would it have made a difference if she'd tried to help him? Probably not. She didn't even feel like she was in control of her own actions anymore. She felt helpless. Like a puppet on a string, unable to do anything but watch herself dance. But then again, wasn't that exactly what she was? Nothing more than a puppet, with Alexiel holding the strings. For all his talk about his "precious sister" and "dearest Alexia", she was just a tool to him. A tool for him to use, a tool through which he could fulfil his desires. And that was all she'd ever be, now.

Pretty good job showing Lyuri's psyche in the situation.

With a dread that bordered on resigned acceptance, she looked up. As she'd expected, Alexiel was still looking at her, not a trace of emotion besmirching his perfectly inhuman expression.

"You've exceeded my original expectations by far. I was originally going to let you go once I was finished with you, you know. But now... now I want you to be my Alexia forever."

Aaaand now we go from creepy to disturbingly creepy.

She didn't resist as he ran his hand against her mask, caressing her false face with his gloved fingers. If she just stayed as still, silent and emotionless as she always did, then maybe he wouldn't hurt her. There was no point in trying to resist him. She'd learnt that on her first day at Cipher. It was easier if she just accepted her fate, accepted that she'd spend the rest of her life trapped behind the mask she'd given her, looking out at the world like a prisoner gazing through the windows of her cell.

I don't think she'd be able to keep that going for more than a few months before starting to consider suicide.

... Moving on!

"You'll be a good dog, won't you? You won't make me punish you?"

Yes. She'd be a good dog. She'd listen to his every word and obey his every order. Then, maybe, just maybe, he'd keep Duke safe. Nothing else mattered to her anymore. She didn't care about what Alexiel did to her. Even if he was nothing more than a twisted mockery of his former self, as long as Duke was alive, then there was still the possibility that everything could go back to normal. Any hope of rescue had died along with Herbert, but so long as that possibility existed, then she could still delude herself into thinking that everything would be all right.

... Well, this is different from what I expected.

She'd be a good dog. For forever, if she had to be.

As Alexiel began to run his hands down her thighs, Lyuri closed her eyes and thought of Duke. For the first time since her ordeal had begun, she managed a small smile beneath her mask. Then Alexia opened her eyes and looked up into the smiling porcelain face that had replaced the only love she'd ever known.

Ow, quite the depressing way to finish it.

Conclusion: For something meant to be a crack ship fic of Allen and Lyuri, it doesn't really look like one. Lyuri clearly still is in love with Duke since he's pretty much the only reason she'll keep going, though I guess the end does imply on some Stockholm Syndrome in there, but it doesn't really look like a shipping fic.

On the other hand this is an awesome Bad End to the Alexia sub-arc and it's surprisingly believable as well. Considering all this hell going on, Lyuri would be broken beyond repair and I can actually see she being affected by Stockholm Syndrome thanks to that. If it happened though, I think Allen would become a bigger Complete Monster than all the villains in this RP combined, that I'm pretty sure of.

The only complaint I have is that Sakura is just kind of there. She would be able to feel exactly what Lyuri's feeling so you'd think she'd say more. Oh, and she escaped from Alexia by herself so she wouldn't have lost any fight in her the moment she got into the warehouse, but I guess this is an AU so I won't press on this. Still, I think it would've been easier to just say that Sakura was taken somewhere else either by Alexiel or by a random Cipher member that he could've called after the deed was done.

Still, I'm actually kinda interest about how things would proceed from there, with Sakura suffering some massive psychological trauma, Herbert dead, Bishop also becoming a Shadow again and just how Lyuri and Allen would interact further. This was a pretty creepy one-shot, an awesomely creepy at that.

This was really well-written too and I kinda feel honored that someone wrote a fanfic about my characters, they're both surprisingly in-character and the story itself was really well written. For all the No Yay in this, I actually think it would work pretty well as a AU Bad Ending for the sub-arc and I really enjoyed reading this. It was well timed too, I was having some depression  today and ironically enough reading this made me cheer up a bit, that and a friend's support.

So, yeah, this was a very Creepy Awesome story, well done!

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Ah-ha! Crack fics are up again.

MOAR. :3

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For a Crack fic, that was really well written.

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Wuh.

[Spectrum was here!]

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...I feel like puking now...

Nyaaa

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Since I can say it now, that was really creepy. Well written, but creepy.

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Probably out of the blue, but I ended up making a Gogie/Sticy Lips thing. (SFW, for the record)

"Welcome. Do you have some... b u s i n e s s?"

"Halt dein Höllesobst mir fern, Versucher." ~ jedesdummisel

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@Allen/Lyuri

Woah

Dude

Seriously

Seriously

I mean

Seriously

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Tadaaaa. Fem!Rex/Noir stuff.

And it's SFW! (Try to contain your disappointment. D: )

"Rex, you're weird!" - Preschooler, Pokémon White 2

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So following Moon's comments, I decided to go and write a continuation of what would've happened in the AU that the Lyuri/Allen fic took place in. It probably doesn't really belong in this thread since it's not really shippy, but I figure I ought to put it somewhere.

Needless to say, if you thought the initial fic was creepy/squicky/disturbing, then that goes double for these next few parts, though again they're all SFW.

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And thus Lyuri becomes the biggest woobie to grace this RP.

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For my own sanity I'm just going to ignore the existence of the Lyuri/Allen fics.

Nyaaa

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...Well then.

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@Allen/Lyuri pt. 2

Nope

Nope

Nope

Nope

Nope